Start with the goal, not the photo
A caption has one job. Before you write, decide what you want people to do after reading: book, trust you, reply or come back. The ideas below are grouped that way. Fill in your details and keep the voice your own.
To get bookings or orders
- Two spots left this Saturday. Grab one with the link in our bio.
- New this week: [product]. Here only until [date].
- Your [service] is due if it has been [time]. Book in under a minute.
- Rainy day plan: [your offer], ready in [time].
- We just opened our [month] calendar. Regulars, you know what to do.
- Gift idea for someone who has everything: [gift card or service].
- Last minute opening today at [time]. First message gets it.
- Order by [time] for same day pick up.
- The [product] you asked for is back.
- Bring a friend this week and [genuine reason it is better together].
To build trust
- Here is exactly what happens at your first visit.
- Why we [do something the slow or careful way].
- Meet [name], who has been with us for [years].
- Before and after. Same day, same client, no filter.
- Our ingredients or tools, and why we chose them.
- A question we get every week: [question]. The honest answer: [answer].
- What we will never do to save a dollar.
- A kind review from [first name]. Thank you, it made our week.
- Five years ago today we opened our doors. Here is what changed.
- Behind the counter at 6am, before you arrive.
To start conversations
- This or that: [option A] or [option B]?
- Help us name our new [product].
- What should we bring back next month?
- Tell us your go to order, we will guess your personality.
- Unpopular opinion: [mild, friendly opinion about your industry].
- Caption this photo.
- Which one would you pick for [occasion]?
- What is one thing you wish every [type of business] did?
- Rate this from 1 to 10.
- Tag the friend who needs this today.
To bring people back
- Missing your usual? It misses you too.
- Regulars get first look at [new thing] this Thursday.
- Seasonal reminder: time for your [maintenance or service].
- Stamp cards are back. Tenth [item] is on us.
- Thank you for a record month. Here is what is next.
- Our holiday hours are here. Save this post.
- Coming back after a while? Here is what is new.
- Thank you to everyone who reviewed us this month. We read every one.
- One tip to keep your [result] looking great until next time.
- See you this weekend? We will have [specific thing] ready.
Make them sound like you
Read each caption out loud. If you would not say it to a customer at the counter, change it. Keep the first line strong, since that is all most people see, and end with one clear next step. Never offer a reward for reviews in a caption. Google does not allow incentives for reviews.
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