Start with the goal, not the photo

A caption has one job. Before you write, decide what you want people to do after reading: book, trust you, reply or come back. The ideas below are grouped that way. Fill in your details and keep the voice your own.

To get bookings or orders

  1. Two spots left this Saturday. Grab one with the link in our bio.
  2. New this week: [product]. Here only until [date].
  3. Your [service] is due if it has been [time]. Book in under a minute.
  4. Rainy day plan: [your offer], ready in [time].
  5. We just opened our [month] calendar. Regulars, you know what to do.
  6. Gift idea for someone who has everything: [gift card or service].
  7. Last minute opening today at [time]. First message gets it.
  8. Order by [time] for same day pick up.
  9. The [product] you asked for is back.
  10. Bring a friend this week and [genuine reason it is better together].

To build trust

  1. Here is exactly what happens at your first visit.
  2. Why we [do something the slow or careful way].
  3. Meet [name], who has been with us for [years].
  4. Before and after. Same day, same client, no filter.
  5. Our ingredients or tools, and why we chose them.
  6. A question we get every week: [question]. The honest answer: [answer].
  7. What we will never do to save a dollar.
  8. A kind review from [first name]. Thank you, it made our week.
  9. Five years ago today we opened our doors. Here is what changed.
  10. Behind the counter at 6am, before you arrive.

To start conversations

  1. This or that: [option A] or [option B]?
  2. Help us name our new [product].
  3. What should we bring back next month?
  4. Tell us your go to order, we will guess your personality.
  5. Unpopular opinion: [mild, friendly opinion about your industry].
  6. Caption this photo.
  7. Which one would you pick for [occasion]?
  8. What is one thing you wish every [type of business] did?
  9. Rate this from 1 to 10.
  10. Tag the friend who needs this today.

To bring people back

  1. Missing your usual? It misses you too.
  2. Regulars get first look at [new thing] this Thursday.
  3. Seasonal reminder: time for your [maintenance or service].
  4. Stamp cards are back. Tenth [item] is on us.
  5. Thank you for a record month. Here is what is next.
  6. Our holiday hours are here. Save this post.
  7. Coming back after a while? Here is what is new.
  8. Thank you to everyone who reviewed us this month. We read every one.
  9. One tip to keep your [result] looking great until next time.
  10. See you this weekend? We will have [specific thing] ready.

Make them sound like you

Read each caption out loud. If you would not say it to a customer at the counter, change it. Keep the first line strong, since that is all most people see, and end with one clear next step. Never offer a reward for reviews in a caption. Google does not allow incentives for reviews.

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